The final chapter has been dealt with, and I'm done. Walking away from the book. I can do no more! I'm happier with this ending so I'm glad I decided to rework it. There's more of a finality to it than my first attempt which I like. Now I need some readers. Anyone up for … Continue reading What's with the crickets?
Okay, I'm almost done with my rewrites. That went faster than I had expected. Most of the changes happened in the middle of the book and there wasn't a lot at the end that needed to be tweaked. I'm happy for it. I'm mulling changing the last chapter, however. I find that it's not satisfying. … Continue reading I need an alpha…reader that is
It's now the ninth of December, and whatever ailment that has kept me from doing anything meaningful is finally starting to wane. Thank you antibiotics! I was trying my best no to have to visit the physician, but come Sunday - a week after I started to become sick - and I could feel the … Continue reading Feeling better
I finally hit the point of collapse, at least as far as my story goes. When I last visited you, I shared an excerpt from the book I'm rewriting, which I'm calling Jasmine, but formerly called Unseen Obsession. I hate that title! I've been doing some minor revisions in grammar, language, and spelling. I've cleaned … Continue reading The Jasmine-Giada Substitution
I'm working on doing some rewrites, and I came across this part. I really liked it and I wanted to share this excerpt with you guys. Enjoy! ~Joe~ “That totally wouldn't happen,” Jacob argued. “Why not?” Jasmine snapped back, annoyed by Jacob's unwillingness to budge. “A guy is not going to let a girl wax … Continue reading Excerpt from Jasmine